Letter Writing # 315 - You recently bought some train tickets for a journey

IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You recently bought some train tickets for a journey a week in advance. When you went to the station to catch the train, you were told you could not use the tickets and the staff were very unhelpful to you.

Write a letter to the train company. In your letter,

  • describe the problem you had with the tickets 
  • say why you were unhappy with the staff
  • suggest what action the train company should take

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,


 

Model Answer 1:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to formally complain about an issue I faced while attempting to travel with your company a week ago.  I hope you will take the necessary actions to address the issue and make sure it does not happen in the future.

In relation to the problem that I faced, on 5th February, I purchased three train tickets online for a journey from Manchester to London on 11th February. However, upon arriving at the station with my parents, I was informed that our tickets were invalid, despite having received confirmation at the time of purchase. The explanation from your staff was vague and I was not given a clear reason why our tickets were not valid for the journey! 

What disappointed me even more was the unhelpful attitude of the staff. Instead of assisting me in resolving the issue, they simply stated that I could not board the train and made no effort to explain the reason behind it. Their dismissive behaviour left me and my parents feeling frustrated and stranded, especially as we had important commitments in London that day.

Given this inconvenience, I kindly request a full refund for our unusable tickets and proper compensation for the situation. Additionally, I urge you to provide better staff training in customer service to ensure passengers receive appropriate support in such situations.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Eva Watson


 

Model Answer 2:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to formally express my disappointment regarding an issue I encountered while travelling with "VIA Rail Canada" on February 25, 2025. I had purchased two economy class tickets (Booking Reference: VRC123456) a week in advance for travel from Toronto Union Station to Montreal Central Station on Train #64, departing at 9:30 AM. However, upon arrival at the station, I was informed that my tickets were not valid, despite presenting the booking confirmation.

Moreover, the station staff were extremely unhelpful and dismissive. Instead of assisting me in resolving the issue, they repeatedly insisted that my only option was to purchase new tickets at a significantly higher price. When I asked for clarification on why my pre-booked tickets were not valid, I received vague and unprofessional responses, which left me frustrated and stranded.

I expect VIA Rail Canada to take responsibility for this inconvenience. I request a full refund for the tickets I was unable to use and a formal explanation of why this issue occurred. Additionally, I urge the company to improve staff training to ensure better customer service in the future.

Please respond at your earliest convenience, as I would like to resolve this matter promptly.

Yours faithfully, 

Jacob Hall

 

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