Letter Writing # 323 - You started in your present job two years ago
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IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
- say what you have learned in your present job
- suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department
- explain why you do not wish to leave the company
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .......................,
Model Answer:
Dear Mr Abraham,
I am writing to express my interest in transferring to a different department within our company to further my career development. I am hoping that you will help me with that.
Over the past two years in my current role as an Assistant Project Manager, I have gained valuable experience in project management, client relations, data analysis and requirement analysis. This role has helped me develop a strong understanding of how our industry works and how to effectively carry out important projects, which I believe can be beneficial in other areas of our organization.
I am particularly interested in moving to the System Analysis and Development team because I believe my skills and experience align well with the work being done there. By making this transition, I can contribute fresh insights while also expanding my expertise, ultimately adding more value to the company. Additionally, a new challenge will allow me to grow professionally while remaining committed to our organization’s goals.
I deeply appreciate the opportunities I have had here and would love to continue my journey within the company. If possible, I would appreciate a discussion on how we can make this transition smooth and beneficial for both sides.
I look forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Eric Buchanan
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