Graph Writing # 9 - If they traveled abroad and why they traveled
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Table + Column Graph:
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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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Destinations of visits abroad by UK residents by main region (1994-98)
Model Answer 1:
The charts present data about the main reasons for travelling by UK residents as well as their favourite destinations from 1994 to 1998.
Overall, the main reasons for Britons to travel during this period were holiday making, business and visits to friends and relatives. Western Europe was their favourite destination.
As the data suggests, the number of holidaymakers steadily increased. In 1994, the number of holiday seekers was around fifteen thousand, and it grew to over twenty thousand in 1998. Moreover, the number of people travelling for business also gradually increased - just over three thousand in 1994 and approximately four thousand four years later. Finally, visiting abroad for meeting friends and relatives showed a steady increase till 1997, when more than one thousand British visited abroad for that reason. All the reasons combined, more than twenty thousand British travelled abroad in 1994 and this number grew by almost nine thousand in just four years.
In addition, Western Europe was the favourite destination of those travellers as nearly eighteen thousand travelled to this destination in 1994 while the rest, nearly four thousand, went to other places. North America seemed the second most common destination for those travellers during this period.
Model Answer 2:
The table data compares the figures of a research on why UK residents visited overseas from 1994 to 1998, and the bar chart illustrates where they travelled during these five years.
As a whole, the majority of the UK citizens travelled abroad for holiday making, business and visiting friends and relatives, and Western Europe was their most favourable destination.
By looking at the table, it can be seen that generally there was a growing tendency for the UK people to travel into other countries from 1994 to 1998. During the second year, in 1995, the total number of travellers marginally declined from just over 22000 to nearly 21500; however, it steadily grew and reached the peak of approximately 29000 in the year 1998.
These people gradually became more interested in traveling to all three regions during this period, but Western Europe was the best option. In 1994, just below 20,000 of the UK citizens went into Western Europe, compared with only almost 1000 into the North America. Furthermore, after a small drop in 1995, the population of Western Europe visitors remarkably increased and reached the maximum of above 24000 in 1998, which was far more significant than the other two locations.
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Sample Answer 3:
The provided charts show the data of a survey conducted on 100,000 people and the statistics shows the number of UK citizen travelled abroad during 1994 to 1998 for different purposes and their destinations. As is observed from the given graphs, most of the UK residents travelled on their holidays and Western Europe was their most favourite destination.
Initially, in 1994, more than 22 thousand UK resident traveled different foreign countries and among them, more than 15 thousand went on their holidays. For business tours, more than 3 thousand people travelled in other countries in the same year while more than 2 thousand people visited their friends and relatives. After 1 year, this number slightly decreased and for the rest of the years until 1998, the number steadily increased in almost all of the categories. Finally, in 1998, the total traveler number reached to more than 28 thousand and among them, more than twenty thousand people travelled to enjoy their holidays.
In 1994, almost 18 thousand people out of 22 thousand went to Western Europe which is significantly larger than the number of people traveled to North America and other parts of the world. The similar trends can be observed for the remaining years and the majority people of the UK went to Western Europe which makes this place the most popular tourist’s destination of UK people.
( This model answer can be followed as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)
Sample Answer 4:
The supplied charts depict an outcome of a survey conducted among 100,000 people and the survey asks the reason behind the journey and preferred destinations between the periods of 1994 and 1998.
In the first graph, in 1994, the holiday was the most significant reason behind the United Kingdom citizen's travel and it accounted 15.246 people whereas, 982 people were traveled because of unspecified reasons. Interestingly, in the case of business and visit to friends and relatives, almost an equal number of people visited 3115 and 2689 respectively. In the number of holiday goers, though, there was a slight decrease in the figure in 1995, rest of the years there was a gradual increase in the account and reached above 20 thousand. In spite of some downward trends in the initial year (1995), there was a marginal increase in all the categories.
From the year 1994 to 1998, it is clearly seen the trend that North America and other areas obtained a rock bottom position with less than 2000 people. On the contrary, the number of visitors to Europe at a zenith level with around 20,000 per year, besides it showed a gradual hike in the total number of visitors to all the three destinations.
[ Written by - Tony ]
As is observed from the table data, the holiday making was the most common reason for Brits to travel abroad. Furthermore, Western Europe was the most visited destination by them.
While taking into consideration, the number of British citizens who travelled abroad for holiday had increased gradually apart from 1995, when it declined marginally. The rise was slightly below 2000 people each year and it was rocketed in 1996. Besides, for business travel, the number had not changed dramatically which was at the onset around 3000 to below 4000 people in 5 years different. The reason for visiting friends and relatives only had mildly climbed which was 500 people in 5 years.
Moreover, most people's destination was Western Europe, and it remained so for 5 years. The difference between Western Europe and North America as travel destinations by Brits was more than 20000 people. The peak of UK visitors who came to Western Europe was in 1998 which was slightly below 25,000 people.
In detail, UK residents showed a tendency to travel to other countries mostly for the holidays, and this can be seen in the figures displayed, as it constituted the highest of them all. Initially, it started over 15,000 visits, and increased gradually throughout the years, reaching 20,700 visits in 1998. In contrast, people in the UK tended to travel less for business and visiting family and friends. The figures for both reasons also grew slightly, starting at over 3,155, and 2,689, climbing to 3,957, and 3,181, visits in 1998, respectively. Finally, British people travelled the least for reasons other than the ones mentioned in the graph.
Moreover, a significant majority of UK citizens chose Western Europe as their favourite destination these years, and a very small minority of them visited North America and other destinations.
According to the first chart, the number of visitors rose by about 6000 visitors from 1994 to 1998 to become exactly 28,828. However, there was a little drop in 1995. The most common purpose for these trips was spending the holiday and there was a moderate portion that was interested in travelling for business and for visiting their relatives and friends but that was a lot more than those who travelled for other reasons.
On the other hand, the bar chart reveals that the most dominant goal was visiting Western Europe, this area experienced an increase in the number of UK tourists with roughly 5,000 passengers to reach 25,000 in only four years. Finally, there was a slow rise in the number of visitors who went to North America and other areas around the world, but it did not exceed 2500 people.
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